My flip book animation is a simple and silly one. It begins with eyes watching a present cross over the page and then disappear. Next, grass begins to form on the page resulting in the growth of a leafy tree which then turns into a leafy monster. The monster growls with his wide open mouth and devours two small fish who are swimming by. Two balloons then appear and float off the page after slightly bumping into one another. Next the sun comes out and then descends, followed by a cloud that finally ends the story.
Let me say that drawing is not one of my fortes and I ended up choosing pictures I knew were easy for me to create and ones that would be legible to readers. This project was interesting and extremely time consuming, but it was definitely an experience that had an enjoyable final result.
I liked the simplicity of your flip book project. I thought you had good creativity with the smooth transitions between pictures
ReplyDeleteYou made very cool creation. Love the eyes how they close and open and your balloons floating around. You also made a good choice to pick this book with this background. Good combination-Great Job
ReplyDeletethis book was cute! you're a good draw-er :) i really liked the fish being eaten part!
ReplyDeleteYour book moved really well and I like how everything morphed into each other.
ReplyDeletei thought you used the open space on the page very well. the eyes idea was interesting. i think you could make your transitions between things a little stronger but overall it was really good.
ReplyDeletei thought this flip book was really awesome, it didn't take up the whole page, only a little corner and it still came out great. you are a much better drawer than you think, alot better than me. and i really like the eye in the beginning.
ReplyDeleteI think the simplicity of your drawings is what made your flip book so creative. You didn't need color or excessive drawings to make yours tell its story. I think it was really well done and very awesome.
ReplyDeleteI thought yours was very simple, yet interesting. The concept was cute and worked well, and I thought yours was probably the easiest to flip, which definitely adds to the drawings and the way the work together.
ReplyDeleteI thought that your book showed motion well. my favorite part was the eyes in the beginning. I also liked that you used a variety of different themes.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the eyes in the beginning and how they looked around and followed the different objects. Very cool. I also liked the transitions between scenes and the smooth motion that it showed. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI thought your flip book was very cute and girly. I adored the woman's eyes following the present, that is definitely like every girl! I also really liked the whole day setting theme. Very good job!
ReplyDeleteI loved how you made the transitions in the corner. It doesn't sound like a big deal, but compositionally it's a great place to have your transitions, plus the book with it's colored background really helps it stand out from alot of us who used text books that have cream or white canvas, even though the animation becomes a bit masculine in the monster eating the fish, it still gives off this feminine feel which is hard when your using such dramatic animations like that.
ReplyDeletei liked the simplicity of this one.....the big growing blob thing looked cool....the balloons reminded me of those dan hertzfeldcartoons
ReplyDeletei really liked that you used the corner of the page... i think yours flipped really well... and i liked how you stuck with pencil
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